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Hey, just wanted to let you all know that I wrote and recorded a song on my acoustic guitar. This is kinda my first time ever really recording something I wrote myself, and most of it is just a sloppy mess of random notes that kinda sound like music. About 90% of everything I recorded here was improvised, so try to take that with a grain of sound. I am open to all kinds of criticism here, I would rather take any feedback that I can get instead of keeping this lost in some folder on my computer forever. Around the 7 minute mark of the whole record, I start to mess up pretty badly around my "solo". Lets see if I can improve on that much the next time around. If you guys wanted to know, the reason why this song is so long is because a) I only just
stopped playing once I started feeling tired, and b) the whole thing is kinda in 3 parts, so keep that in mind.  Couldn't think of a title for this piece yet, so I just called it Take 1, because I am unoriginal. Anyway, here's the thing for you guys. Enjoy, or don't.

Part 1 (Intro): 0:00-0:56
Part 2 (Chorus): 0:56-4:30
Part 3 ("Solo" and Outro): 4:30-10:25

Embarrassing Screw-Up (Bad): 6:40-7:15
 

 

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Timestamps for Parts 1-3
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Diverse sound, overall good flow. This one gets a Very good out of Extremely Good for me.

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I like the main chorus riff. Definitely saw some grunge influences in there.

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You should let me record some drums for your track

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8 hours ago, Puncake said:

You should let me record some drums for your track

Maybe if I feel like it, I'll hit you up. But I haven't had time to play around with the drum settings in GarageBand yet so we'll see.

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1 hour ago, Hank_Hell said:

What tuning is that

Low to high: Db-Ab-Db-Gb-Bb-Db

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